中考英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，中考英語(yǔ)作文范文【20篇】
來(lái)源：好上學(xué) ??時(shí)間：2023-07-24
中考英語(yǔ)作文一般不會(huì)太難。同學(xué)們應(yīng)該清楚：其實(shí)，每個(gè)人的智商都是差不多的?？紙?chǎng)上，比的就是每個(gè)人的心態(tài)和細(xì)心程度，如果你心態(tài)好、基礎(chǔ)扎實(shí)、做題細(xì)心，那得高分簡(jiǎn)直是小菜一碟了。
中考英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
第四檔：(15—13分) 語(yǔ)言流暢，語(yǔ)句通順，合乎邏輯。 適當(dāng)使用連詞成分。 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第三檔：(12—10分) 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確。 使用簡(jiǎn)單的連詞成分。 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第二檔：(9—6分)漏掉一些信息點(diǎn)。 有些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。使用簡(jiǎn)單的連接成分。 基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第一檔：(5—1分) 描述不清楚，內(nèi)容不連貫。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯錯(cuò)誤影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解。較少使用連接成分。不能清楚的表達(dá)寫作目的。
2011
假設(shè)你是張林，即將初中畢業(yè)，你的美國(guó)筆友Bob來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的暑假計(jì)劃,現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你寫一封回信，告訴他你將在爺爺奶奶家度過(guò)這個(gè)假期。注意： 1. 至少寫出你將要做的三件事。 2. 回信至少不少于80詞，信的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3. 所給英語(yǔ)詞匯僅供參考。 參考詞匯：summer; grandparents; relax oneself; housework; visit; old friends and relatives
Hi, Bob,
The summer vacation is coming soon..
After a tiring school year, I’m gong to relax myself. I will spend my vacation with my grandparents. I will stay with
them for about three weeks. Of course, I am going to help them do some housework. Perhaps we will take some short
trips. Besides, I am going to visit some of my friends and relatives. I think we will have a happy time together. What’s more , I will be a senior student in a new term , so I am going to make some preparations. How will you spend your
holiday?
Best wishes.
Yours, Zhang Lin
2012
假設(shè)你是趙銘.你班來(lái)自美國(guó)的交流學(xué)生Robert患病住院已有三周.請(qǐng)你用英文給他發(fā)一封電子郵件.主要內(nèi)容包括：詢問(wèn)病情; 介紹班級(jí)近期活動(dòng)或?qū)W習(xí)情況;表達(dá)祝愿。 注意： 1.詞數(shù)80一100詞左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié).以使行文連貫; 3.信的格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Robert,
It’s three weeks since you were ill. How are you feeling now? We all miss you very much. Recently we have had many activities. We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won the first prize. The matches were exciting and tough. But we tried our best and got the good result. What a pity! You didn’t watch them. I hope you’ll get well soon and come back earlier. We’re busy preparing for the singing competition now. We practice a song every day in order to sing best. Remember to have a good rest and don’t worry about your lessons. I’ll help you with them.
Best wishes.
Yours ,Zhao Ming
2013
假設(shè)你是周浩，你遺失了你的英國(guó)籍好友Frank借給你的一本書(shū)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封信表示道歉，包括以下內(nèi)容：1. 怎么遺失的;2. 對(duì)該書(shū)的評(píng)價(jià);3. 如何補(bǔ)救;4. 你的教訓(xùn)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80 —100詞左右;2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已替你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Frank，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last week. I like the hook very much and I read it every day and plan to finish it next month. Last night when I came to my room, it wasn’t found anywhere. I will get a new book for you.
Old books are like old friends. Once they are lost，they can never be replaced. I feel sorry for losing the book. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Zhou Mao
2014
良好的生活與學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣對(duì)我們的成長(zhǎng)是非常重要的。請(qǐng)從以下的習(xí)慣中選擇一個(gè)你以前做得不夠好，但現(xiàn)在已具備的好習(xí)慣，談一談你養(yǎng)成這個(gè)習(xí)慣的過(guò)程及收益。要求：1)不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息; 2)內(nèi)容完整，書(shū)寫整齊; 3)80詞左右; 4)文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My good habit
My good habit is early to bed and early to rise.Two years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student, I liked reading books in bed.Every day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until 24:00 o’clock.The next day I couldn’t get up on time. I used to be late for school ,and I felt tired in class.It was too bad.With the help of my teacher and my parents, I
gave up the bad habit.Ever since then, I go to bed early and get up early .I never go to school late again.As a result ,
I’m much stronger and doing better in school now.
2015
假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席王東,為了配合環(huán)保教育主題活動(dòng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給提示,用英語(yǔ)寫一封倡議書(shū)，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 環(huán)保措施和美化城市的措施(各2條); 2. 你的希望。注意： 1. 注意文章的整體連貫; 2. 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); 3. 80詞左右。
Dear friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should
Dear friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water
everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it?s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn
the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we?d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.
In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!
Thank you.
Wang Dong
2016
初中生活中，你有些什么改變?你是怎樣改變的?請(qǐng)以“How I have changed”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)小短文，描述你發(fā)生的變化，寫作內(nèi)容包括：興趣愛(ài)好、行為習(xí)慣、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等方面。 要求：1. 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，80詞左右。 2. 任選兩方面內(nèi)容。 3. 語(yǔ)言流暢書(shū)寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。 4. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名校名。
How I have changed
How time flies, Three years has quickly passed, and I have changed a lot during these days.
On one hand, I wasn't good at learning English at first, When my English teacher learned about that, she taught me how to memorize new words, and to read at many passages is as possible, soon I made great progress and became
interested in English.
On the other hand, I was too weak to do my exercise, but with the help of the teachers and clas*ates, I do exercise
whenever I am free, and now I can run very fast and I ’am also good at playing basketball like other boys.
Thanks to the middle school life ,I have changed so much !Thanks to the teachers and clas*ates, I have learned so much ! Never will I forget the valuable middle school life !
必背范文選篇
感想 / 學(xué)習(xí)篇
( 一 ) 為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，《中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)輔導(dǎo)報(bào)》舉行了一次以How to be a good learner?為題的征文比賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)寫一篇80詞左右的短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>
【How to be a good learner?】
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
( 二 ) 親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，你的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請(qǐng)你以“My English Study”為題，談一下三年以來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的心得體會(huì)。
要求：1.要點(diǎn)包括你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟; 2.詞數(shù)80左右。
【My English Study】
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my clas*ates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
情感 / 生活篇
( 一 ) 父親節(jié)馬上就要到了，但是有些同學(xué)不知道送什么禮物給父親。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示進(jìn)行適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，并向同學(xué)們提出一些建議。80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾以給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。提示：1.如果有足夠的零花錢，可以為父親*一些使用單不貴的東西，如領(lǐng)帶等;2.還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do)，如為父親準(zhǔn)備一杯茶等他下班后飲用等。
【Father’s Day】
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
( 二 ) 今天是母親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c母親一起度過(guò)這個(gè)特別的日子。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 表述你與母親間的情感;2. 為母親*一張卡片;3. 幫助母親做點(diǎn)事;4. 陪母親散步等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
( 三 ) 某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開(kāi)展題為How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文參加此次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)：1.父母規(guī)矩太多，過(guò)于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，不理解自己等問(wèn)題;2.你對(duì)這些問(wèn)題的看法;3.你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法。
【How to keep a good relationship with parents】
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
寫人 / 記事篇
( 一 ) 假設(shè)Linda是你的好朋友，你們兩年沒(méi)有見(jiàn)面了。上個(gè)星期她從國(guó)外留學(xué)回來(lái)，你們很高興見(jiàn)到彼此。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，簡(jiǎn)要介紹Linda的變化。提示：1.外貌：以前個(gè)子矮，短發(fā);現(xiàn)在個(gè)子高多了，長(zhǎng)發(fā)。2.愛(ài)好：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天;現(xiàn)在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書(shū)和散步。3.性格：以前外向;現(xiàn)在有些內(nèi)向。要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.層次清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢;3.80詞左右。
【My best friend】
Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
( 二 ) 背景設(shè)定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，想了解康明家鄉(xiāng)的變化。假如你是康敏，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給Miachael回一封電子郵件。過(guò)去生活條件差，道路狹窄，車輛少，住不好，吃不飽，聯(lián)系不便......現(xiàn)在生活條件優(yōu)越，道路寬，車輛多，住得舒適，*普及......要求：1.圍繞以上內(nèi)容進(jìn)行合理表述;2.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表中的所有方面;3.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)以給出(不計(jì)入詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通訊)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
Dear Michael,
You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a *all, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food.
The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few *s have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
( 三 ) 假如你是李華，今年上初三了，現(xiàn)在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數(shù)：60-80。
【My life】
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.
風(fēng)俗/ 禮儀篇
( 一 ) 請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示以“The Spring Festival”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。提示：1.春節(jié)是中國(guó)最重要的節(jié)日;2.人們大多回家過(guò)年，家庭成員團(tuán)聚;3.家人一起吃團(tuán)年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友(friends and relatives);4.孩子們喜歡春節(jié)。
【The Spring Festival】
The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
( 二 ) 假如你是郭佳，你的美國(guó)筆友Linda給你寫了一封信，說(shuō)她想給自己的漢語(yǔ)老師送一份禮物來(lái)表達(dá)自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中國(guó)的送禮習(xí)俗，所以請(qǐng)你給她一些建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信給她。
提示：1.要根據(jù)個(gè)人喜好選擇禮物;2.禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙(wrapping paper);3.不要送鐘、鞋或者梨。要求：1.語(yǔ)意通順，條理清楚;2.80詞左右。(信的格式和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
Dear Linda,
I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.
Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Guo Jia
( 三 ) 剛到中國(guó)來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)不久的John應(yīng)漢語(yǔ)老師的邀請(qǐng)去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob請(qǐng)教相關(guān)禮儀。假設(shè)你是Bob,請(qǐng)你給John回一封電子郵件，告訴他一些注意事項(xiàng)。80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear John,
I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.
First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.
Good luck!
Yours,
Bob
社會(huì) / 網(wǎng)絡(luò)篇
( 一 ) 隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費(fèi)觀念轉(zhuǎn)變，購(gòu)物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購(gòu)”成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也正加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。
優(yōu)點(diǎn)1. 足不出戶;節(jié)約時(shí)間;避免擁擠、勞累。2. 價(jià)格通常比較便宜。3. 可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。
缺點(diǎn)1. 只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身。2. 容易購(gòu)*大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)。
注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面;2.80詞左右，開(kāi)頭文章已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu) shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 導(dǎo)致 cause
【Shopping online】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
( 二 ) 現(xiàn)在很多中學(xué)生都喜歡流行歌曲。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
【Pop songs】
Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.
A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.
健康 / 生活篇
( 一 ) 健康對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)非常重要，我們可以用很多方法來(lái)保持身體健康。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個(gè)方面說(shuō)明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
【Good Ways to Keep Healthy】
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?
First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.
Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.
Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you *ile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.
( 二 ) 健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問(wèn)題，我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛(ài)健康”為主題的主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?. 保持健康的重要性;2. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜;每天鍛煉一小時(shí);;早睡早起;勤洗手;3. 自己的看法(至少一條)。注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名;2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。3.字?jǐn)?shù)60-80詞;4.文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
【Keep healthy】
Boys and girls ,It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or *oke .They are bad for our health.
( 三 ) 近20年來(lái)，各方面的調(diào)查表明：青少年的體質(zhì)不斷下降。請(qǐng)你以“How to keep healthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的看法和建議。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。主要內(nèi)容包括：1. 體質(zhì)下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...2. 合理的健康建議。如：should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(飲食平衡), enough sleep
【How to keep healthy】
Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.
Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.
Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.
社會(huì) / 環(huán)保篇
(一)節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從身邊的小事做起。作為一名學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣看待“低碳”生活?請(qǐng)以“My low — carbon life”為題寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)述自己對(duì)“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80詞左右。提示：1.步行或騎自行車上學(xué); 2.節(jié)約用水; 3.不用塑料袋; 4.節(jié)約用電; 5.充分使用紙張。參考詞匯：on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap
【My low-carbon life】
Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?
Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
( 二 ) 為配合我市“禮儀呼和浩特(Charm Huhhot)”活動(dòng)的開(kāi)展，某學(xué)校開(kāi)展以“How to behave well”為主題的英語(yǔ)作文，請(qǐng)你以一名中學(xué)生的身份寫一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.守時(shí)，不說(shuō)臟話;2.禮貌待人，熱心助人;3.遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾;注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名;2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充。
【How to behave well】
As a student in Huhhot, we should behave well.
First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
什么作文才能得滿分?
基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，句型結(jié)構(gòu)、語(yǔ)法沒(méi)有任何錯(cuò)誤，單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)沒(méi)有任何錯(cuò)誤。
文章結(jié)構(gòu)脈絡(luò)清楚、層次分明。所需要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)讓人一目了然。比如總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)始闡述觀點(diǎn)，然后firstly,secondly,thirdly,all in all。這樣一路闡述。
適當(dāng)引用名言，這就有點(diǎn)像小學(xué)語(yǔ)文作文用成語(yǔ)的效果一樣。
內(nèi)容不要偏離主題。
書(shū)寫工整、流利也不容忽視哦。
高分、滿分技巧
構(gòu)思清楚再下筆。
平時(shí)積累些名人名言，在考試的時(shí)候可以直接用上。
尤其要注意的是，英語(yǔ)作文并不是數(shù)字越多越好，比如規(guī)定120個(gè)詞語(yǔ)，你就寫120個(gè)詞語(yǔ)上下就可以，少了不行。多了，更加不行。為什么呢?你寫的越多從中暴露出你的錯(cuò)誤也就更多。
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